"...it looked like a legless white dragon, but from the distance we were at it appeared smaller than I knew it was"... "It didn’t have an attractive face; it was long and looked a bit like a horse skull with yellow-white skin draped over it messily, and its eyes were sunken into their sockets and un-seeable. Huge antelope-like horns crested over its head and stopped between two bony shoulder blades a ways down a long, thin neck; it seemed it did have arms, but they were short and didn’t look to be of much use, until you looked at the huge claws at the end of its defined fingers."
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An entity. "It had no name that can better be translated into a language you could understand." From Tears of the Sun ( [link] ), first introduced in chapter thirteen.
...Aww. It's just as horrifyingly adorable as I imagined it. These things're about two to three hundred feet long, and their heads're about three stories high if their mouths are shut. They tend to only be in Makai, but when they get through rifts into Ningenkai...heheh, I'll leave it to your imagination the massacre they leave behind.
I might make a reference/breed sheet for entities, but I doubt it. Can't imagine why anyone but me would want to draw 'em, and I don't need a reference. >.< So I guess if I did it would only be a breed sheet.
Critique welcome for once because it's just a sketch that I'll probably scrap soon, and because there's no anatomy to be critiqued negatively, since it's my own creation.
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Entities (this sort, at least. There is a name for them in demon...but people can rarely even pronounce the title of my webcomic right, let alone this breed, so I'll just leave it as what it's called in English) and Tears of the Sun are 's.